- Great to see that you have spent time working on all 7 set posts so far.
- I thought your post on 'What Makes a Good Music Vid' showed good creativity with use of contact sheet, etc.
- Post 4 - 'Reflection on my progress so far' was creative and visual also. I like that you used Wordle and selected images. Your written comments show some thoughtful reflection on how you have developed in your understanding of technology / planning and approach to film making
- You still need to complete and embed the very first small group lip synch to 'In The Sun'.
- Check your use of 'i' - it should not be lower case when saying something like 'I contributed by...'
- You need to come back to post 5 'Reflecting on Music Video Challange' - and scan in the planning documents you and Emily created for costumes. This post could do with more detail.
- Good to see you have an entry already for posts 6 and 7 - make sure you come back to these and make them visual by Tues 19th July.
IN - This is a pity, as you have completed some good work, but you still need to complete and embed the very first group lip synch we did to 'In The Sun'. You must make sure you come back to post 5 and add in other scanned planning docs.
SJA
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